On this page I have made a log of the specific revisions that I have made to improve my wikispace based on the suggestions made to me by the teacher.
6/18/2012
Page: Professional Development Page
Suggestion: Be specific on what you are committing to long term and short term goals.
Revision: I changed my goals to something that is more measurable than I had previously. For instance I changed my goals to reading one article a week as opposed to as many as possible.
6/20/2012
Page: Content Area Research
Suggestion: Proofreading to ensure there are no grammar or spelling errors.
Revision: I reread the page and corrected all the grammar and spelling errors that were present.
6/26/2012
Page: Tools and Games
Suggestion: The calculator widget does not seem to fit the page, either delete it or add clarification for it.
Revision: I added clarification on why it is there: to help the students with their math homework in case they do not have a scientific calculator at home.
6/26/2012
Page: All pages
Suggestion: Add a picture or image that pertains to the content on each page.
Revision: I checked every page to make sure there was an image that was fitting to the particular content on the page. I also made sure that each of them were cited properly with correct spelling,
7/2/2012
Page: Calendar
Suggestion: Change the permissions on the calendar you added because it is not showing up for anyone but you.
Revision: I went to my google calendar, changed the privacy settings so others could view it, and reuploaded it onto my wiki page.
7/2/2012
Pages: Content Area Resources, Wiki Rules, Tools and Games, & Professional Development
Suggestion: Don't have a title and a subtitle that is the same.
Revision: I deleted the subtitles that were the same names as the titles.
7/2/2012
Page: Tools and Games
Suggestion: The arrangement of the widgets appears off. The three reading widgets are stacked next to each other with the explanation for calculator next to them.
Revisions: I changed the arrangement of the widgets so they would appear stacked on one another. I also added a line in between them so it would be more organized and less confusing.
7/5/2012
Page: Projects Page
Suggestion: Add a description of your objective of the podcast. Also, add a description of the activity you talk about in your podcast.
Revision: I added the PASS objective that we focused on in the podcast. I also added a brief description of the activity.
On this page I have made a log of the specific revisions that I have made to improve my wikispace based on the suggestions made to me by the teacher.
6/18/2012
Page: Professional Development Page
Suggestion: Be specific on what you are committing to long term and short term goals.
Revision: I changed my goals to something that is more measurable than I had previously. For instance I changed my goals to reading one article a week as opposed to as many as possible.
6/20/2012
Page: Content Area Research
Suggestion: Proofreading to ensure there are no grammar or spelling errors.
Revision: I reread the page and corrected all the grammar and spelling errors that were present.
6/26/2012
Page: Tools and Games
Suggestion: The calculator widget does not seem to fit the page, either delete it or add clarification for it.
Revision: I added clarification on why it is there: to help the students with their math homework in case they do not have a scientific calculator at home.
6/26/2012
Page: All pages
Suggestion: Add a picture or image that pertains to the content on each page.
Revision: I checked every page to make sure there was an image that was fitting to the particular content on the page. I also made sure that each of them were cited properly with correct spelling,
7/2/2012
Page: Calendar
Suggestion: Change the permissions on the calendar you added because it is not showing up for anyone but you.
Revision: I went to my google calendar, changed the privacy settings so others could view it, and reuploaded it onto my wiki page.
7/2/2012
Pages: Content Area Resources, Wiki Rules, Tools and Games, & Professional Development
Suggestion: Don't have a title and a subtitle that is the same.
Revision: I deleted the subtitles that were the same names as the titles.
7/2/2012
Page: Tools and Games
Suggestion: The arrangement of the widgets appears off. The three reading widgets are stacked next to each other with the explanation for calculator next to them.
Revisions: I changed the arrangement of the widgets so they would appear stacked on one another. I also added a line in between them so it would be more organized and less confusing.
7/5/2012
Page: Projects Page
Suggestion: Add a description of your objective of the podcast. Also, add a description of the activity you talk about in your podcast.
Revision: I added the PASS objective that we focused on in the podcast. I also added a brief description of the activity.